Assignment 1: Review

Xue Li informed me that I have to follow the name stated on the instructions list for the production house. As such, I went to take a more detailed look at the instructions and realized I have had to include alot of things. So I made some changes and this is the copy that I presented in class:



Review from class:

• Too text heavy on the left side
• Title font is not readable

So here is the improved version:


I changed the font to another type of distorted font to bring out the theme. Hope this one is better than the previous one in terms of readability. I did not want to change to something clean and clear because it defeats the whole purpose of trying to build up surrealism. Other than that, I cut down the information given with just - when, where, how. I will be asking around for more opinions before I decide if this will be my final product...